Feedback:
*Couldn't get a photo of it, but sometimes (so far only CPU) will slowly decent down off the stage until it does something like jump (my guess).

Optional:
*His crouch medium hit is similar to an uppercut. I am suggesting that it should launch the character for some combos, because Tom has low combo potential.
*Taunt, but it's not really that important.
*Win Pose: Consider editing this, since the win pose is Tom punching.

Overall, it's a pretty good character (at least by my standards) and if I were to choose your edit and Warioman's Tom, your edit is MILES better than his.